On Your Porch


Without you, there was no hope

Languished in pain so, that all desire let go

Staggered unsteadily to your door…..

You were a no show, yet dragged myself on the floor

Let my whims and fancies lead me on

Lead me on to lie on your doorstep and fawn

The world was all ears….waiting for me to break

I ran towards you, though my foot steps could be heard across the lake

I was there…stood there all along

Even when you were a long gone

 

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~ by eugenicist on September 26, 2011.

10 Responses to “On Your Porch”

  1. way too go.

    what sweet passion, well done.

  2. beautiful passion, well done!

  3. Nice one! Kind of sad, but nice!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/

  4. this is so nice and love how you ran across the lake and thought he could hear your footsteps as you ran well done
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370

  5. amazing.

    🙂

  6. Its sad and beautiful.. i could relate to the pain that you were going through when it was all that was left, with you there standing alone… liked your lines…

    ‘I ran towards you, though my foot steps could be heard across the lake
    I was there…stood there all along’

    Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”

    Shashi

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.html

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